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Her life and consciousness were slipping away
Dripping like water in a cave
The other choked her neck until she could feel nothing.
Pain. Weakness. Fear. Death.
Absolutely nothing.
Dripping like water in a cave
The other choked her neck until she could feel nothing.
Pain. Weakness. Fear. Death.
Absolutely nothing.
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The second thing I wrote today in PE, in a different perspective of the first poem, 'Feeling nothing: Fury'. I wanted the view of the dieing girl to be heard. So.. here it is.
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